Actioning the text, verb that describes the actions of your character in that scene.

Enters. This is the scene that we meet Sally. She is described as "rather pretty, rather sophisticated".  It sounds sort of dramatic she enters, the star the main character. She makes a big entrance performing on stage seducing the audience. She is the star of the scene. Speaking to whom she wants knowing they'll be interested. I chose the word enters as Sally makes a marvelous entrance. A performance of an entrance, she shows she is sexy, fun, and wild. Sally slowly sashes towards the stage. Her heavy, sultry eyes make intense contact with every male and female voyuerist in the audience. But her eyes only connect to one, Cliff. Her body moves slowly and eroticly around the dancers making her entrance to the front. The audience feel as though t is just them and Sally in the room. Why slowly? Sallys body is feeling some intense euphoric feeling after her cocaine. She moves her arms dramatically. The way she moves entices the audience.

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